cookEmonster

Wow. This story is amazing! It captures all your mind into it and lets you imagine all the details. I love your style of writing(: Keep up the great work! ...

This is amazing. I really like how you explained the depths of their feelings. It really made me feel connected to the story. (: Great job! -CookEmonster

This is truly amazing. I literally have tears in my eyes right now. I can feel the emotion radiating off you're work. I'm speechless... -CookEmonster

This is amazing. Incredible. It's message is so deep. It's that good that I have a complete loss of words. (: Good job! -CookEmonster

Thats really good. It pulls me into the story and lets me take place of the main character. I like your style of writing. It really makes me want to ...

Thats so amazing! It made ME want to cry at the end! Its so sad ): BUT I LOVE IT. hahahah. -CookEmonster

HAHAH. I absolutely LOVE this! Its so hilarious! :P You're writing style in this is really good too. -CookEmonster

WHHYYY. Please write more! Hahah, I'm dying here. (Even though you wrote it in March)

This is so good! Hahah I'm only on the first chapter so far but don't worry- I'll be reading the rest as soon as I get something to eat! xD ...

Wow. Hahah, This is... Simply Amazing! It's so deep and pulls you in within the first WORD. xD Well, looks like I'm following you! :P -CookEmonster

Ooh, this seems really good! Short chapter though! ): Hahah, Can't wait to read more!! -CookEmonster

Thanks guys! I'll start with the editing now (: sorry i didnt reply earlier, life got in the way as usual!

Thanks guys! I'll start with the editing now (: sorry i didnt reply earlier, life got in the way as usual!

Ok, thanks! That helps me a lot :D

That's really good! Deep too (: I liked it, something about it didn't capture me right away though. Its still good though! From, CookEmonster [: