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As for your idea, I think that would work. It would help tie things together. But don't worry too much about the "filler" pieces. Sometimes nothing really is happening. For ...

Ah okay, this all makes sense. Yes definitely keep the action/fighting in mind for future reference. Maybe in a rewrite or a side story. Or even a whole new novel. ...

I definitely agree with that being one of the hardest things! But those articles are absolutely wonderful. Had to bookmark them. Thanks for linking them for me!

You did an awesome job of answering them. I'm more excited for the next installments. And no problem! Thank you for writing some good stuff!

I felt weird about how I've written Mathias throughout this but ignored this feeling. I plan to edit that, and more, when (if) I finish. Your feedback is awesome! Taking ...

I don't mind you reviewing as a standalone. You pointed out a lot of things I didn't consider. Very helpful! Thank you for the feedback!

Glad to see my questions interest somebody. I guessed Seven to be around that age -- 16, 17, or even 18. Almost an adult with how she seems to carry ...

It's up? Lucky me! This section's got me hungry for it. No problem! And I'm sure you will!

Wow, I can see that I totally missed chances for developing Hira just through those dreams. And also clarifying Mai's relationship with Hira. I guess I was just too wary ...

Your suggestions are awesome -- I never thought of it before. I should definitely try to think of different ways to describe her status and such, and other things in ...

Hahaha, I didn't realize its length until I posted it. No problem!

Hey! It is totally okay. Your reviews are never rusty, not even this one. It looks fine to me. Thanks for taking the time to read and review in the ...

Happy Review Day! Late, but I still said it! :) First off: thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me! :) I think a lot of your confusion stems ...

Hey there, :) I'm replying on my phone so there's bound to be mistakes while writing this. Please bear with me :) First off thanks for taking the time read ...