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Half Of You To Hold- CHapter 3:Love isn't like it is in Hollywood It was almost Christmas the next time we saw each other. Revision for January exams had all ...

Half Of You To Hold-Chapter Two: Losing My Faith Autumn was giving way to winter, but that was not the only reason I was feeling so cold. I had not ...

Thanks for all of the reviews! I do lack in punctuation skills and I'm sorry about that My story is based on a true story-our story Maybe that's why I ...

I liked this It wasn't perfect in terms of lexis used or fluency but I liked the overall sentiment. I didn't mean to hurt you/didnt mean to make you cry ...

I really liked this beautiful imagery, good rhythm Nice sentiment. Perfect poetry! Love itt Sxxx

thanks for the comments S xxx

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Thanks for the nice comments I appreciate them S xxx

I really liked this poem I like the ABAB rhyming scheme and the powerful imagery Very nice I look forward to reading more of your work. S xxx

this is really touching and emotional I like it well done =) Sarah xxxx

I wish my mad mind could be as creative as yours "I'm a ballerina" weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Liked it mucho Sarah xxx

I Loved this poem very moving and meaningful I loved the part about youth's sweater unravelling-unique and original metaphor. I really reaaly like you work. You should get publsihed!!! Fabulous ...

Sounds like a drug trip ahha

cat_910 Thanks for the nice comments! How are you? Sarah xxx

Loved this haha