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Re: Ghost Hospital
WOAH! I am totes not going to a hospital anytime soon :P This reminds me of when Rick wakes up from his coma in the walking dead! Only this time ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: From Somewhere, There Came a Knocking
OH cool!!! I love me a good scary story! I've been home alone at night with my dog before! And I know all too well about hearing strange noises in ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Who's the Fairest of Them All?
Hi! OMG this was so funny! I love how you made Snow White live at a college! ' I love SnowWhite it's my favorite fairy tale!! I love how you ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Princesses Anonymous
This is so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like how you made it see, like they all had issues!!!! I love how Cindy thought Auroua was cheating with her husband, TOO FUNNY!!! And ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Smiles of the Weak
I like this, because people question life and death all the time. It reminds me of Hamlet!!! "To be, or not to be, that is the question— Whether 'tis Nobler ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: The Urge to Jump
I like this, especially because the characters motives aren't so clear. I like the way you described the mountain!!! I LOVE hiking and I have been to a place, like ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: The English C
I liked this! My eleventh Grade teacher was a horrible teacher!! She assigned essay's on a one night's notice! So I am well aware of monster teachers!! I like the ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Day of a prostitute
I like this! I feel bad for the girl, I always hate the idea of women being degraded!! The reason this is interesting, is because it shows the truth behind ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Pure Terror
OMG This happened to my mom when I was little!! I had a poster of the Disney Princesses! And it fell and shattered!! My mom nearly had a heart attack!!! ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: The Accident
I like this!!! The way you described the characters gave me a good sense of it!! This reminds me of a story I read once, called the Wrestler. About a ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Set in Stone
I understand this, I recently lost my beautiful Aunt. Losing someone is hard, and I know what its like. I like how you described her positive qualities. When we lose ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Fine
Wow, I enjoyed this. I have a similar story in mine. The main character was a recovering addict and his fiancee cheated on him. I love the clear way you ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: I Just Wanna Run
This was really good, I deeply understand that pain. I had a loved one go through drugs. I saw how it affected the family. I love how you had inner ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Lucky Pair
OMG I love POV stories! I really liked how you described everything the glasses heard. Nice use of personification!! I once read a story where someone put it in the ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: Familiar Taste of Poison
WOW, Great job. It is a very powerful story with lots of emotions. I know the 1920s was a tricky time. With lots of rebellion and times of changes. I ...
Nov 4, 2013
