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I'm sorry, but I have to deny your request. I was immediately drawn away from this because of the scene. I have read SO many poems of hate, anger, chaos, ...

I am in love with your poem. So much. Just had to let you know. Amazingness. Alright, review time. Official review----- 1. New title. I think this poem is so ...

um. well.....interesting concept...? i acctually really like it, but its shallow, lacking in a point, and very amuzing. love it. =D (wait...why do they die if they dont dance???) oh, ...

As everyone has stated, the "th'"s are reallly unfitting. As Suzanne pointed out, working on a poem for more than two minutes is almost common curtouesy. Take a little more ...

I think so. Maybe. Yes, I think it is. It's a story. About a girl. Joey was right about the little boy holdin on to his life...where does he fit ...

Hey Ghost. Hannah is very right. But she is also right in saying, Don't give up! It has to have flair to catch anyones eye. Right now in this poem ...

Darn. Forever Threnody beat me to the full bod crit, but maybe i can add something... this tale is of Hannibal a great general was he with eyes like a ...

Hi, I'm Clue. =) This was interesting. I think though you used roses as an example, you really meant the meaning to go deeper. This poem had an undercurrent of, ...

I can't describe this poem in one word. Let me just say this. There are a TON of poems out there that are about suicide, or suicidal thoughts. If you ...

Hey, Baily. I'ma give you a full body crit. Hope you don't mind? You always make me laugh. You never make me cry. Please don't let these --This line throws ...

when i was reading the beginning i thought wow, this is going to be really good. and then i got to the end. it's not an end. it's a...thread of ...

Thank you dear friends, you did great things for me, --First of all, keeping constant capitalization at the beginning of each line helps the reader immensely. If a poem has ...

Hey. This was, to tell the truth, very boring, like TL G-Wooster said. There was lack of description and again, and TL said, lack of emotion. It seems this would ...

Ghost, I liked it. I think I derived my own meaning from it though... I'm not sure if my interpretation was what you were aiming at. I guessed that you ...

This was pretty good. I'm a lil skeptical about love poems though... there's so many of them, and so few of them are really worth while and good. This one ...