cloverbreath

This looks a lot cooler on Word; I have it in Courier New so it actually kind of looks like a telegram...but I'm too technologically challenged to figure out how ...

I enjoyed the repetition you used when you were knocking on the door and the progressive way that the knocking became more and more. I would have enjoyed some imagery ...

I like this, for sure. It definitely has some relation to what I'm sure almost everyone has wanted to do at one point. I got a little confused on the ...

Overall, very cute and very loving. It strikes a place with my own freckled face. I appreciate the way you bring that topic that we hear so many times to ...

I agree. I like the tackling of this subject and your approach to this--how you can find the funny side of things and also the way that it's just plain ...