Published October 23, 2010
There’s a sizeable hole in the plaster
From the day it got too much
The wall took the brunt of my anger
Infused with my hell at the touch.
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Um....short. Very short. But in that shortness you packed a powerful punch. (Please excuse the extremely corny pun.) It's kind of hard to review something so...er...brief, so yeah....I like it.
I like this, for sure. It definitely has some relation to what I'm sure almost everyone has wanted to do at one point. I got a little confused on the second line and had to read through it twice to make sure I knew what the subject of that part was referring to--on the first read through it seemed to refer to the plaster wall. Otherwise, it was very nice: short, sweet, and to the point.