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Thanks for the review! I was worried about being overly dramatic in some parts, but not really the first stanza. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll try to tone it ...

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Thanks for the review!

Hi, and thanks for reviewing! My teacher did like it (she even read it I the class). And I do actually have some short (very short) stories, but they're in ...

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Yeah, you have a point about the title. I was considering other things, like "i wrote this in (insert some cheesy night metaphor or something)" but I was worried it ...

Okay, I'll fix that thing you pointed out. Thanks for the review! :)

Ah, sorry for the double post. :)

Yeah I second this. Also, When the cards are fold, when the day is dark this line is very similar to the first few lines of Demons by Imagine Dragons, ...

Yeah I second this. Also, When the cards are fold, when the day is dark this line is very similar to the first few lines of Demons by Imagine Dragons, ...

Yo, formatting tip. In the publisher, press "shift" along with "enter" when making a new line, and that way it won't be so spaced out. Also, you won't need the ...

Hmm, I'm not sure I like either of those suggestions because they're a bit too straightforward. You could consider just saying "sound" and leaving out the adjective before it. I'd ...

In answer to your question about formatting: When you're in the YWS publisher, press "shift" along with "enter" when you're making a new line. That'll remove the double space and ...

Poetry formatting protip: In the YWS publisher, instead of just pressing "enter" to write a new line, press the "shift" key along with the "enter" key. Then, it won't be ...