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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Chapter 1

    *Irish accent* Hello there, Sir/Lady Maple! We're here to give you our totally objective and necessary opinion on your work of literature. It's an interesting premise to be sure, although ...

    Mar 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Wedding Guests

    Ho there, Plume! You've done us the great service of reviewing most of out works and it is longs since due that we repay the favor. After reading through the ...

    Feb 22, 2021
  • Other » Humor, Realistic Re: How To Take Writing Notes Like A God

    An agreeable plan indeed! We at the guild know for a fact that the vast majority of our notes are kept in a pile on the floor of some of ...

    Feb 22, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dirty Business

    This story is intriguing. However, we're not going to lie to you, we do have several critiques. BUT!, we'll start with the positives. The story well written. You have well-established ...

    Feb 5, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Bottled Euphoria

    Well met Nate! We at the guild are going to share our very inexperienced opinion with you! First we must ask, what time period is this? You mention guns and ...

    Jan 15, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Thief Of Dust And Dawn- chapter 2

    A fine tale indeed! However, we must say that it was slightly confusing at the beginning. We do concede the point that that is most likely entirely on us for ...

    Jan 14, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: inconsistent temperature

    We at the guild appreciate the light-hearted tone of this poem. You don't often see something like that in 2021 (course it's only been twelve days). This pail intrigues us. ...

    Jan 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Ocean’s Herald

    We here at the Guild are slightly bewildered. We've read works such as this before and it provides the same kind of effect. You've not included enough detail, nary a ...

    Dec 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Nimué - Chapter One

    A promising start! To start off, the worldbuilding in the beginning helps draw the reader in. In our collective opinion, worldbuilding and the culture of written peoples is one of ...

    Dec 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Mines - Flash fiction

    This tale does indeed make one's blood run cold. The strange occurrences these miners experience certainly makes one wonder about R.A.D. Considering that this was flash fiction, it is very ...

    Dec 3, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Radiation

    The Cidrian Writer's Guild is rather confused. We assume that this story is based off events from another world. We do not know of a place named "Chernobyl" on Cidri. ...

    Dec 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Knights Inn

    A thrilling tale indeed! The Writer's Guild does, however, have a few slight critiques. The largest being a lack of detail. While the story is quite interesting, it could've benefited ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Ruins of Grandeur

    Due to a recent threat of schism among the Writer's Guild, our head, Thathnak Nerkog the Bookish, shall be reviewing the majority of this work, as well as presenting the ...

    Nov 30, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: algebra woes

    We approve. Math is something that nobody loves, especially when they introduced letters. We greatly appreciate the humor with which this was written. Humor is something often forgotten these days ...

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Clockwork Titan

    We really like this story. It's interesting, it has a great capacity for world-building (and capitalizes on that), and it introduces you to characters that are inherently likable even though ...

    Nov 6, 2020


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— Terry Pratchett