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Re: Breathe
Good Evening, Kit/Kitkit/Kitkitkat, Now, I'm not really one for the deeper side of writing or thinking, but I figure you deserve a review, so here goes nothing. Firstly: If you've ...
Jul 22, 2022 -
Re: Marla is not a witch!
Hello there, Recal! Quite excited to jump back into YWS on your work! So, onward! BRAVELY! Firstly: Marla Thatcher. I'm Irish, so you can see some problems I have with ...
Jul 22, 2022 -
Re: Flash Fiction - Atlas: Dawn
Hello! We are the Cidrian Writers' Guild, here to fill you day with unsolicited advice! Your story is good overall. It's got interesting characters and an even more interesting premise. ...
Nov 11, 2021 -
Re: Prologue
Hello there! We are the Cidrian Writers' Guild, here to brighten your day with unwarranted and unsolicited criticism. Are you ready? We've read through the whole thing and come to ...
Nov 9, 2021 -
Re: The Time Giant
Hey there! We're the Cidrian Writer's Guild and we'd normally make a sarcastic comment about tearing into your work for no reason but you seem nice so we won't do ...
Aug 31, 2021 -
Re: King of the Court [Chapter 15]
Hey there, Inu! *half-hearted sarcastic joke about being unnecessarily critical* This is a small piece you have here, so we don't have a lot to tell you, but we'll give ...
Jul 20, 2021 -
Re: Galaxy On The Brink
We would quickly like to preface this by being EXTRAORDINARILY pedantic and pointing out that Albert Einstein once said: I know not with what weapons World War III will be ...
Jul 20, 2021 -
Re: Terror at night.
Hello there, Zycoptl! How are you? Good? Well, we're about to make it not that way. Let's get into the review! This is a good story. The only problems we ...
May 29, 2021 -
Re: 11.. 4.. 3.. (formerly Assembly of Absolutists) - Chapter One
AH! We're back! Happy to see us? No? Good! That means we're doing out job write. HA!! GET IT?! Into the review! Right off the bat, lots of respect to ...
May 8, 2021 -
Re: Fire & Lightning - Ch 3
Hey there! The Cidrian Writer's Guild is here to make you feel bad with pointless criticism and obtuse remarks! You ready? Doesn't matter, we don't care! First off, your beginning ...
May 8, 2021 -
Re: Corrupt Ghosts
A tale chilling to the bone! Shut up, that can be used to describe things other than temperature. The thing that sticks out to us the most about this is ...
Apr 11, 2021 -
Re: Assembly of Absolutists - Prologue
Now, don't take this the wrong way, we're just very blunt, but the best way to describe this work is...confusing, or maybe helter skelter. Maybe that was what you were ...
Apr 11, 2021 -
Re: Dread
Ho there, James! The Cidrian Writer's Guild is here to satiate our own egos by being unnecessarily mean about something you're, in all likelihood, emotionally attached to! Ready? No? TOO ...
Mar 26, 2021 -
Re: Trying to write
Hello there, Underscore! We understand your frustration. Countless times have we touched quill to parchment (what is this "typing" you refer to), heads filled to bursting with ideas, only to ...
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: The Wolf - Chapter 1
*Irish accent* AND RIP IT APART WE SHALL! Hello there, Ilium. We're here to be critical, nitpicky, boring, and slightly insulting to this work of literature you've clearly put lots ...
Mar 13, 2021
