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  • Short Story » Lyrical, Other Re: Breathe

    Good Evening, Kit/Kitkit/Kitkitkat, Now, I'm not really one for the deeper side of writing or thinking, but I figure you deserve a review, so here goes nothing. Firstly: If you've ...

    Jul 22, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Marla is not a witch!

    Hello there, Recal! Quite excited to jump back into YWS on your work! So, onward! BRAVELY! Firstly: Marla Thatcher. I'm Irish, so you can see some problems I have with ...

    Jul 22, 2022
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Flash Fiction - Atlas: Dawn

    Hello! We are the Cidrian Writers' Guild, here to fill you day with unsolicited advice! Your story is good overall. It's got interesting characters and an even more interesting premise. ...

    Nov 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue

    Hello there! We are the Cidrian Writers' Guild, here to brighten your day with unwarranted and unsolicited criticism. Are you ready? We've read through the whole thing and come to ...

    Nov 9, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: The Time Giant

    Hey there! We're the Cidrian Writer's Guild and we'd normally make a sarcastic comment about tearing into your work for no reason but you seem nice so we won't do ...

    Aug 31, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court [Chapter 15]

    Hey there, Inu! *half-hearted sarcastic joke about being unnecessarily critical* This is a small piece you have here, so we don't have a lot to tell you, but we'll give ...

    Jul 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Galaxy On The Brink

    We would quickly like to preface this by being EXTRAORDINARILY pedantic and pointing out that Albert Einstein once said: I know not with what weapons World War III will be ...

    Jul 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Terror at night.

    Hello there, Zycoptl! How are you? Good? Well, we're about to make it not that way. Let's get into the review! This is a good story. The only problems we ...

    May 29, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: 11.. 4.. 3.. (formerly Assembly of Absolutists) - Chapter One

    AH! We're back! Happy to see us? No? Good! That means we're doing out job write. HA!! GET IT?! Into the review! Right off the bat, lots of respect to ...

    May 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fire & Lightning - Ch 3

    Hey there! The Cidrian Writer's Guild is here to make you feel bad with pointless criticism and obtuse remarks! You ready? Doesn't matter, we don't care! First off, your beginning ...

    May 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Corrupt Ghosts

    A tale chilling to the bone! Shut up, that can be used to describe things other than temperature. The thing that sticks out to us the most about this is ...

    Apr 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Assembly of Absolutists - Prologue

    Now, don't take this the wrong way, we're just very blunt, but the best way to describe this work is...confusing, or maybe helter skelter. Maybe that was what you were ...

    Apr 11, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Dread

    Ho there, James! The Cidrian Writer's Guild is here to satiate our own egos by being unnecessarily mean about something you're, in all likelihood, emotionally attached to! Ready? No? TOO ...

    Mar 26, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Trying to write

    Hello there, Underscore! We understand your frustration. Countless times have we touched quill to parchment (what is this "typing" you refer to), heads filled to bursting with ideas, only to ...

    Mar 25, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: The Wolf - Chapter 1

    *Irish accent* AND RIP IT APART WE SHALL! Hello there, Ilium. We're here to be critical, nitpicky, boring, and slightly insulting to this work of literature you've clearly put lots ...

    Mar 13, 2021


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