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I had to read this for my book group earlier in the year and I HATED IT! I couldn't stand it! We got no information about what was going on, ...

That was amazing. I am dumbfounded. My head is spinning from how brilliant that was. This piece is a real tribute to the awesomeness that is Snoink. You have a ...

This was good. I don't think you need anymore, it's fine like this. I'm glad you gave a us the characters age's before the story started, you really couldn't tell. ...

This is really good. You're got quite a talent for lyrics, judging by this song. I really liked it. In story it's just like half the songs on the charts, ...

This was really good. I'd love to hear it with musical. I could pretty much sing it with a simple tune, although there were parts that slipped me up. You ...

I only skimmed it, but it's really interesting. I can tell what you mean by all the words seem to point to a certain age. This must have been really ...

This was nice. Very calming. I was a bit confused at first, but I soon got the hang of what you were doing and I really began to enjoy it ...

Nice. I like this a lot more than the first bit. I really like Renee already, and I definitely want to find out more about her. I'd like to point ...

This was okay. I'm afraid I'm going to have to tell you that I didn't love it, but it was alright. I just didn't get the feeling that Eric has ...

This was really random, but I like random facts so it's okay. Some of them I already knew, but some of them were new to me. There's a couple of ...

That was really cool! At first I wasn't sure where it was going, but I really liked it in the end. I like how you've got 8 short chapters and ...

This is... amazing. There are no words in the world to describe how this made me feel. I can't deny considering starvation, but I've never had the courage. Reading pieces ...

Interesting. I've never seen anything like this before. I can't say I understood it fully, but I liked it all the same. I found one mistake: dessert Should be desert, ...

This was good. Not particularly original, pretty much every second song on the charts is like this, but it has potential. The thing that annoyed me was that I couldn't ...

You are amazing! Absolutely amazing. I wish I could write like you. *bows and chants* Teach me, oh great one! Now, I did actually pick up a couple of mistakes ...