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Thank you all so much! But I must ask, what's the Completely Evil Plan?

Yeah, haikus are 5 syllables, then 7, then 5. So I'd fix these.

Um, this isn't really a poem, and I'm not sure how to critique it. Did you put this under the wrong category?

The whole point of the trees was to show that NONE of them were in any way religious, or tied to any religion. Hence the last line of each stanza. ...

Wow. I just felt my self esteem explode. Hehe. I'm not very good to be around when I'm over confident. You have created a monster. But thank you!!

I think the edited version does flow better. It is simple and to the point, but well written too. You can immediately relate to the subject of the poem, the ...

Thank you all! By "plains of china" I meant china as in porcelain china, the kind they make plates out of, not the country. And plains like the plains of ...

There are a few spelling errors, such as 'flaring', 'manes', and 'throw'. Definitely fix those. Maybe fix up the rhyme scheme a bit too, so there is a pattern and ...

As for the punctuation, I would actually pattern it like this: First line. Second Line Third Line; Fourth Line. Other than that, it was great. Nice job.