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Re: As I walked the window's edge
I think that this poem is a teeny tiny bit confusing but other than that beautiful. I think it is really nice how you made it so that your character ...
Feb 25, 2016 -
Re: I Told Her I Loved Her on the Fourth of July
WOW!! This is poem is amazing. I have to admit that this is probably one of the best poems I will read on YWS. It was wonderful how you used ...
Feb 23, 2016 -
Re: nighttime admiration
WOW!! This poem is really touching. You have a really nice way with words and this was a good poem. It is really amazing how you used scientific words to ...
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: Head case
I think that you should continue the story because so far it is very intriguing. You have a very nice way of placing certain phrases in the correct places. I ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Memories
I can really relate because my grandmother died a few years ago too. I know how it feels and this poem is really how most people feel when someone close ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Dancing with the Devil
Hey, cool cat writer. I saw your poem and i gotta say, I enjoyed it. It wouldn't be horror, per say, in the means of terrifying and scaring your reader, ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Nature's Fire
What a sweet and warm poem. It is reminiscent of a haiku, and fills you up with mirth and delight. It's pleasing and kind, with an old and homey vibe. ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Are You Happy?
I can really relate to this poem because I get bullied a lot. I really agree with the lines "Are you happy that you made me cry?" because I cry ...
Feb 18, 2016