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Dear captainstrider, you have put together a masterpiece with the capability to become amazing! There are some things I do not like, such as the phrase "The storm hangs aimlessly ...

Greetings kathryn, pleased to meet you, and read your stuff. I am fond of you descriptions, but I would like it if you had more descriptions. I do not like ...

Dear Mialynire, i enjoy your take here on how hope is a powerful weapon to use against the darkness. You have a really unique world view, as most people i ...

Dear raginglive, you are truly a master of imagery! I love how you speak of the clouds hiding their tears, of the sun trying depretly to remain optimistic, and of ...

Dear box 10, I am fond of your piece and I like the angle you are coming from. You use excellent descriptive imagery in your short story and the way ...

Please forgive me if my review stinks! Greetings remington38, I love your story! Your use of imagery brings a wonderful touch to this amazing story. I love the way you ...

Greetings dracula, I must say your poem is a beautiful piece of liturature. I am find of the way you use references to actual mythology in your poem for it ...

Greetings Gravity... have to say your masterpiece has unnerved me but it has done so in a good way. I agree with you on many of your points and I ...

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This is magnificent! I love how you teach a moral through your story, but you coat it in lovely poetry,like the sweetest of candies! It leaves such a wonderful new ...