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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Because I was a club secretary

    Okay, this was hauntingly beautiful and can I just say that I love this? And possibly hug you for writing this? There isn't much to nitpick, so I'll do that ...

    Aug 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: So Many Lost Ones

    Hey, nice to see a fellow Hetalia fan on the site. Let's get right to the review, huh? First off, I'll get into the positives. Lukas' reactions in the beginning ...

    Aug 27, 2018
  • Script » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: The Disappearance of Annie O'Connor

    Hello, nice work you have here. I found this piece to be pretty interesting, especially since scripts aren't something I read a lot of. Overall, I found this work to ...

    Aug 26, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: That's You, Mum

    Hey, this is an excellent piece you have here! I find it really realistic in its portrayal of abuse and I think that handles it in a mature manner. It's ...

    Jun 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I'm tired

    Hello, I hope things are going well with you. When it comes to poetry, I think you have a good bit of potential- the emotions depicted are clear throughout your ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: A Sojourn Through the Conscience

    Just... wow. I loved getting to read this, and it's insane that no-one has reviewed this yet! Your story has a haunting quality to it reminiscent of H.P. Lovecraft. Despite ...

    Feb 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: birdfeeder

    Greetings, lovely work here. I really like how you use simple but elegant language to convey what you are trying to tell, without fancy flourishes or unnecessary lines. Despite the ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: Blue Ocean Eyes

    Hello there! I must say, I rather like the piece you have here. As a poem, it has a rather interesting flow, although, towards the beginning it seems like you ...

    Dec 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Winter Cataracts

    Greetings! I must say, I really like what you did here. It is interesting and refreshing to see the change in format, especially when it is so well carried out. ...

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Script » Satire, Dramatic Re: Death: A Musical Comedy (Act I Scenes 1&2)

    Greetings Fortis! Nice piece you have here. Overall, I can't find too many errors, so congrats! However, I'm not too familiar with musicals and their scripts, so my review probably ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Poet's Branch (Part 1)

    Greetings Alice, long time no see! I really like this, and congrats on branching out into the wonderful world of short stories! ^v^ However this is a review, so this ...

    May 22, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Think Twice

    Hello Alice! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed anything for you in while, but here I am now! ^v^ Okay, first off, although this is kind of a common topic, I ...

    May 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: In one hour

    Greetings km1717, this is an excellent piece you have here! However, you do have a few errors. "This is a cruel, cruel twist of fait..." Here, "fait" should be spelled ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: Your mirror of 2016

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    "The probability of your being a teenager is very high,too." Space between "too" and the comma please! "Yeah, I do that,too." Another space between "too" and the comma please! Okay, ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: A Foul Embrace

    Greetings! First off, I must say that this is an amazing poem! I really like the descriptions you use, and it is difficult to find any errors. In most cases, ...

    Jan 31, 2016


if ya mention chickens, i have to show up, that is the law.
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