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Re: Because I was a club secretary
Okay, this was hauntingly beautiful and can I just say that I love this? And possibly hug you for writing this? There isn't much to nitpick, so I'll do that ...
Aug 27, 2018 -
Re: So Many Lost Ones
Hey, nice to see a fellow Hetalia fan on the site. Let's get right to the review, huh? First off, I'll get into the positives. Lukas' reactions in the beginning ...
Aug 27, 2018 -
Re: The Disappearance of Annie O'Connor
Hello, nice work you have here. I found this piece to be pretty interesting, especially since scripts aren't something I read a lot of. Overall, I found this work to ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: That's You, Mum
Hey, this is an excellent piece you have here! I find it really realistic in its portrayal of abuse and I think that handles it in a mature manner. It's ...
Jun 25, 2018 -
Re: I'm tired
Hello, I hope things are going well with you. When it comes to poetry, I think you have a good bit of potential- the emotions depicted are clear throughout your ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: A Sojourn Through the Conscience
Just... wow. I loved getting to read this, and it's insane that no-one has reviewed this yet! Your story has a haunting quality to it reminiscent of H.P. Lovecraft. Despite ...
Feb 2, 2018 -
Re: birdfeeder
Greetings, lovely work here. I really like how you use simple but elegant language to convey what you are trying to tell, without fancy flourishes or unnecessary lines. Despite the ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: Blue Ocean Eyes
Hello there! I must say, I rather like the piece you have here. As a poem, it has a rather interesting flow, although, towards the beginning it seems like you ...
Dec 27, 2016 -
Re: Winter Cataracts
Greetings! I must say, I really like what you did here. It is interesting and refreshing to see the change in format, especially when it is so well carried out. ...
Dec 11, 2016 -
Re: Death: A Musical Comedy (Act I Scenes 1&2)
Greetings Fortis! Nice piece you have here. Overall, I can't find too many errors, so congrats! However, I'm not too familiar with musicals and their scripts, so my review probably ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Poet's Branch (Part 1)
Greetings Alice, long time no see! I really like this, and congrats on branching out into the wonderful world of short stories! ^v^ However this is a review, so this ...
May 22, 2016 -
Re: Think Twice
Hello Alice! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed anything for you in while, but here I am now! ^v^ Okay, first off, although this is kind of a common topic, I ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: In one hour
Greetings km1717, this is an excellent piece you have here! However, you do have a few errors. "This is a cruel, cruel twist of fait..." Here, "fait" should be spelled ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Your mirror of 2016
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Feb 28, 2016
"The probability of your being a teenager is very high,too." Space between "too" and the comma please! "Yeah, I do that,too." Another space between "too" and the comma please! Okay, ... -
Re: A Foul Embrace
Greetings! First off, I must say that this is an amazing poem! I really like the descriptions you use, and it is difficult to find any errors. In most cases, ...
Jan 31, 2016
