chezka199

Hi there! The content of your poem is very interesting and hauntingly beautiful. Is it a personification of Hypocrisy? I was writing a review, but I did not see much ...

I was interested by the content when reading this, and i believe that it is a lovely start. :) I was however, surprised by the format, and it made it ...

Hello! This has lovely and haunting content, and the way you've written it really lets the reader feel what the writer is feeling. It was interesting to see no rhyming--quite ...

Like you, I have not been on in quite a long time, and I'm glad that this was the first thing I read coming back. I believe that it was ...

Hello there! Did you really write this in ten-ish minutes?! It is really very good! I think my favourite part is the very beginning and the end, it just brought ...

Hi! I thought that this was lovely, and if you hadn't said you were new to poetry, I never would have guessed it(: I didn't see anything wrong with the ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem! It's so pretty! A bit confusing at times, but it was lovely. I would go through it and look for things that could be ...

Hiya! Agreeing with Arryn, I thought it brings up tough topics and then questions them which I really liked about the poem.. I really did not see anything to change ...

Hiya! I thought that your poem is very unique and pretty.. But I couldn't follow it. It's probably just me needing to reread it again. I like the varying vocabulary, ...

Hi there! I absolutely love this poem! I think that it covers a difficult topic perfectly. A lost love... Trying to find yourself... Understand and share how it feels... It's ...

Wow! I didn't really know what to think while I was reading this, but it's really good! I really loved the last bit though, Fair is foul, and foul is ...

Hey! I thought that this poem was really cool, I've never read a poem made out of haiku! I think sparkling can be read different ways even if there is ...

Ahh! I loved this piece! I thought it pulled the more sad tone with a hint of resentment (maybe?) very well!I I feel that I know kind of what you ...

Hi there! I thought this was a lovely piece! I had a bit of a hard time following it though, like it jumped a little. The best part, I thought, ...

Hi! I thought that this piece was beautiful. :) The descriptions easily painted a picture and showed the emotions of the soldier perfectly! The part to say where he is ...