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Awww! I get where you're going with it! However, the words and such are a bit off, but tweak that as you like. The rhyme scheme is hard to follow, ...

I couldn't have said it any better myself. Not at all. Nada. Cheez_Burger!

Very nice! I don't want to repeat everyone, so you need to make a poem for ME to review first! Do it! NOW! Cheez_Burger!

Wow. I like it. It's like breathing. poetry comes very naturally to you! Bravo! Encore! Cheez_Burger!

Wow! This was a great poem, and I look very much forward to your works. Sadly, I have no comments on it, because other people beat me to it D: ...

Ain't that the truth.

I really liked it! Very descriptive and wonderful plot! I look foreward to more of your work! ~Cheez_Burger~

AHHHHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed SO hard! This is Hilarious, especially for someone who's read it! You're a genius! Pure genius! ~Cheez_Burger~

Well Elli, here's how I hack facebook and such. Okay, start off with Alli trying to hack Nate's email and the security question pops up. Then, have Alli warm up ...

I like it! In fact, I went to see that movie not to long ago...Very descriptive! Keep it up!! ~Cheez_Burger~

I disagree EXTREMELY with this last post. You know, lots of poems DO take 10 minutes to write, I'm not saying all, but most do. So, the one part I ...

Very good job! I know exactly what this is like, and i see where you're coming from! Bravo! Encore! ~*Cheez_Burger*~

You repeated notice a bit too much! Other than that, good work! ~*Cheez_Burger*~

I agree with the first post. The ryhme does sound a bit forced, and to me, it's hard to figure out what this poem is trying to portray. But, I ...

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