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Re: Together
Hi, Charlottejoness here for a review! I really liked reading this poem it is very unique and different to other love poems. However, in order to make it even better, ...
Apr 11, 2018 -
Re: Another Day of Girl Talking
I liked reading this, you should carry it on! I've read from some of your replies to other people's reviews that you didn't do this as a serious thing which ...
Apr 8, 2018 -
Re: we woke up the long way [edited]
I absolutely loved this, the techniques you used were amazing and it flowed so well. I loved the rhyme particularly and the overall theme to the poem was consistent. The ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Excuses
This is a motivational piece, and I can imagine many teens taking this as a wake up call as you have said. However, the poem didn't seem to have many ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: A Loyal Friend
Your imagery is brilliant in this poem, I really enjoyed it and I could really feel the emotions throughout that the narrator was experiencing. The emotive language and dialogue that ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Hear my Plea
I really loved reading this poem, it's very powerful and your use of imagery is vivid. The rhyme in it puts a nice, flowing effect to the poem. I think ...
Feb 15, 2017 -
Re: Tidal Wave
I really enjoyed reading this, it was very imaginative and very unique which made it very interesting. I didn't see many spelling/grammar mistakes which is great! The character's emotions of ...
Jan 28, 2017 -
Re: Bradley
This story brought a tear to my eye, the way you described the main character was very realistic and I had so much sympathy throughout reading it. It's so unfortunate ...
Jan 28, 2017 -
Re: Losing the Light
This story is amazing and very realistically written. Many people suffer from heartbreaks everywhere, and the way in which you describe the character's emotions is unique and gripping. I felt ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: My Grandpa Is Dead
This is a very beautiful and thoughtful piece of writing. I'm so sorry to hear about your loss and I'm so very glad that you are able to reassure yourself ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: The first time I saw her...
I really like this piece of writing. It is descriptive and it shows the way in which you see your sister which is truly lovely, by the way! The similes ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: One More Time with Feeling
This story was very detailed and realistic; a common thing which happens in nowadays' society! The way in which you wrote it was very convincing and eye-catching, wanting me to ...
Jan 16, 2017
