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Thank you so much for an awesome review. I have more. I just haven't uploaded much on here. This particular chapter is about 20 pages - like most the chapters ...

I just don't feel like you read the chapter in it's entirety and I do not know how to reply. The chapter is NOT about Gerald Kelly. I just do ...

First the flashbacks. The point of the flashback with Kelly is to show his relation with the Evans, because - of course - this is an Evans chapter. He remembered ...

Take your mind on a wild ride; or in the words of 60s icon Timothy Leary: "Turn on, Tune in, && Drop out."

Hey, thanks for the awesome review. It was much waited for and much appreciated. I am definitely working on my tense, you will see how far I come if you ...

It is awesome that my style remind you of so man fabulously talented authors. I really appreciate your thoughts. I look up to you as a writer, and I am ...

Hey man, thank you so much for taking the time to review my chapter. I am flattered by your envy and even more excited that you are interested in continuing ...

Hey thank you so much for such an honest and thorough review. I have a problem with tense, I definitely know that. I am not a beginning writer - I ...

You have a really interesting concept here. It is rich with context and a number of really good ideas. Try to focus your story a little more. It just really ...

Like all your work you do so well not to repeat a single metaphor or analogy. It is almost as if you write with the divine hand of vocabulary and ...

Thanks, the first part of the second chapter, which I uploaded this morning explains the werewolf.

Very creative and really funny story. I really enjoyed it, partially because goats are one of my favorite animals, and two. . .you never really get stories about trolls anymore. ...

we're different. I just noticed that you gave him the same advice.

Thanks you! Be sure to check out the second part of this chapter. And the first part of the second chapter to get a broader scope of Qualm Meadows and ...

Thanks man, be sure to check out the second part of this chapter. And the first part of the second chapter to get a broader scope of Qualm Meadows and ...