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Hi, Defying! Well this is a relatively short piece so I don't know that I'll be able to offer any deep insight or anything. As far as prologues go this ...

Hi, MadisonMae! First things first: I was very close to not reading this because it's so long. However, I'm a sucker for a romance story and that alone pulled me ...

Hi, Pokemonlover! I'm a fan of Pokemon--the games, the show, whatever--and I can say that this definitely reads like a concise description of the events that'd go on upon arriving ...

Hi, Comical! Okay, I'm not sure what audience this is supposed to be geared toward but I'm already intrigued and it's only the first chapter. You've got a knack for ...

Hello, EllaBliss! First off, thanks for being so motivational during this Reviewing War, haha. You've been keeping spirits high and we all appreciate it. Okay, so I'm no poetry buff ...

Hi, 567, Wow, wow, wow. I've read a lot of stuff on here and this is striking in that it's absolutely vulgar and still manages to be intellectual at the ...

Hi, Sassy, This is a really stunning poem because it speaks out against something that should not be nearly as common as it is. Girls are getting too comfortable these ...

Hi, Ulala, Okay, my biggest complaint with this piece are the shifts in verb tense. I've always had such a hard time writing in past tense and I find myself ...

Hi, Gypsianna :) I'm going to be honest, I had a hard time reading this--not because the story was bad or anything, but because the sentence structure was killing me. ...

Can I just say, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS. I've been trying to explain to people for ages that there is not a difference between a 'bad' word ...

Hi, Tri :) First of all, let's start with the negatives. -I didn't like how quickly Adela asked Todd to meet up with her. I think that transition from strangers ...

Hi, Rachel! This is a really stunning piece, not because it's filled with flourishes and flowery prose, but because it is so straightforward. That allows the narrator's desire to experience ...

Hi, Ulala! This is a really solid piece of work. I love the premise of the story and the street cleaners are definitely nightmarish. Your descriptions are great and I ...

Hi, Dark! Wow, this is absolutely stunning. I'm amazed that you managed to keep up a rhyme scheme all the way throughout. That, plus your incredible imagery and the way ...

Hi, Fictional! This poem reminded me a lot of Shel Silverstein's stuff in some places, which is great, and it was kind of messy in others. A couple of times ...