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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: LAPIS :Chapter 2:

    I'm loving this story more and more. The cliffhangers at the end of each chapter always make me want more. You really describe your characters well and make them so ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: LAPIS :Chapter 1:

    Wow first chapter and I'm in love. While reading I always try to imagine how the scene looks like. For this I want to know how the surrounds are and ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:

    LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THE COVER. HOLY. It's just as good as the story. I'm really intrigued to see how this is going and who this girl is. Your writing is ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Copie chat!

    Oh my glob. This was the epitome of awesomeness. Literally was laughing the whole time. But the mustache man and the little girl are so cute. But seriously what is ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Script » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Cindy

    Oh how I love this. It is a great modern take on Cinderella and makes me want to read more. Cinderella is badly retold by many, but you certainly told ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: What Makes You Feel Orange

    Hmm I like your title and your story. Anyways, I really liked the story. I thought it was pretty funny when Adam wrote the letter instead of answering the question. ...

    Aug 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My Body is Not a Temple

    Oh my gosh this is amazing. It was so simple but has so much meaning! Where in the world did you get the idea for comparing your body to a ...

    Aug 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: One Match

    Oh wow! I think the main character just went psycho. I'm sorry but seriously, he liked killing the guy and he lit a church on fire. Talk about crazy much. ...

    Aug 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Body is Not Poetry

    This is so beautiful! You wrote this poem wonderfully. I love the way you compare things to your body parts and the last stanza was my favorite! I don't really ...

    Aug 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: It's her.

    This is so sad. *cries* I loved how you used colors to differentiate people. I also like how you crossed out things you want to say. I hate poems like ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Biting Game: Alice's Story.

    I liked the idea of Biters. Kind of like vampires I guess.. You should fix the parts where they are supposed to be in italics. You must've messed up a ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Oppressed

    Welcome to YWS! I absolutely positively loved this! I loved the idea the way you wrote it and everything! There were no mistakes for me to find which is great! ...

    Aug 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: i never lernd to spel good

    This is just too funny! It's bringing tears to my eyes. Alright I love I everything about this! The title immediately made me want to click on it and read ...

    Aug 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: How Not to Lose Your Virginity

    This was simply amazing! Just three lines meant so much! Good job on that! Usually some people think that if you put more lines in a poem it'll have more ...

    Aug 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Six Impossible Things

    Hello! I loved this poem! It was very interesting and funny! I love the six impossible things that you picked! They are certainly impossible :). I love how you use ...

    Aug 9, 2013


Anne felt that life was really not worth living without puffed sleeves.
— L. M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables