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Re: LAPIS :Chapter 2:
I'm loving this story more and more. The cliffhangers at the end of each chapter always make me want more. You really describe your characters well and make them so ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 1:
Wow first chapter and I'm in love. While reading I always try to imagine how the scene looks like. For this I want to know how the surrounds are and ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THE COVER. HOLY. It's just as good as the story. I'm really intrigued to see how this is going and who this girl is. Your writing is ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Copie chat!
Oh my glob. This was the epitome of awesomeness. Literally was laughing the whole time. But the mustache man and the little girl are so cute. But seriously what is ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Cindy
Oh how I love this. It is a great modern take on Cinderella and makes me want to read more. Cinderella is badly retold by many, but you certainly told ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: What Makes You Feel Orange
Hmm I like your title and your story. Anyways, I really liked the story. I thought it was pretty funny when Adam wrote the letter instead of answering the question. ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: My Body is Not a Temple
Oh my gosh this is amazing. It was so simple but has so much meaning! Where in the world did you get the idea for comparing your body to a ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: One Match
Oh wow! I think the main character just went psycho. I'm sorry but seriously, he liked killing the guy and he lit a church on fire. Talk about crazy much. ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: My Body is Not Poetry
This is so beautiful! You wrote this poem wonderfully. I love the way you compare things to your body parts and the last stanza was my favorite! I don't really ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: It's her.
This is so sad. *cries* I loved how you used colors to differentiate people. I also like how you crossed out things you want to say. I hate poems like ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: The Biting Game: Alice's Story.
I liked the idea of Biters. Kind of like vampires I guess.. You should fix the parts where they are supposed to be in italics. You must've messed up a ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Oppressed
Welcome to YWS! I absolutely positively loved this! I loved the idea the way you wrote it and everything! There were no mistakes for me to find which is great! ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: i never lernd to spel good
This is just too funny! It's bringing tears to my eyes. Alright I love I everything about this! The title immediately made me want to click on it and read ...
Aug 9, 2013 -
Re: How Not to Lose Your Virginity
This was simply amazing! Just three lines meant so much! Good job on that! Usually some people think that if you put more lines in a poem it'll have more ...
Aug 9, 2013 -
Re: Six Impossible Things
Hello! I loved this poem! It was very interesting and funny! I love the six impossible things that you picked! They are certainly impossible :). I love how you use ...
Aug 9, 2013
