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I'm still in love with this story. I just have to say that the next step for you would have to be details. I don't know what age range you ...

This poem got me teary-eyed the moment I started reading it because this reminds me a lot of how my best friend left when we were in eighth grade. Well, ...

I needed some humor on this site, and this play gave it to me. I can imagine this as a skit somehow. Like, if I were to show this to ...

The last line of this poem happens to be the best line. Not only is it the title of the poem, it's the one line that brings everyone to their ...

I liked the sounds you added to this piece. The "whoosh" just made me shiver. "beach, blonde hair" There are two spellings for "blond." Blond is what you use to ...

From the beginning, I knew this poem was going to be a beautiful story. Of course, it's the ocean, and just the setting itself. Secondly, I just never know how ...

These are pretty good poems. I wonder how old she is because I hope I can give her some advice. The majority of the lines are sentences. I'd say if ...

the moon reached its apex." I'd say let there be more detail in this story. Do the Show, not Tell tactic. That does millions of people wonders. "What?" he asked, ...

I thought this story was very interesting. I can't wait to read more of the novel, but I do have things to say as far as grammar is concerned. "...once ...

This chapter makes me even sadder now that it's in Jane's point of view. The poor girl has to suffer not being awake. Comas suck for everyone. Again, spotted a ...

I'm in love with the Peter Pan series, so the moment I saw this story, I had to read it. It's very sweet how Peter still cares for the family ...

This whole story almost made me go into tears. Because of the words you chose for this poem, I can feel how the narrator is feeling. I may not have ...

This chapter sounds so cute. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. It's just that I have a lot of things to say when it comes to ...

When I'm reading this, I know it's about a volcano eruption, and because of that, it makes me think of the Pompeii disaster. The last line, "But the memories will ...

"13" is thirteen. "...Hazel Grove, but that took eight hours." "Three years passed, and I had made a few friends." I feel bad for this girl 100%. Her aunt died, ...