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I loved how dark this story was. My heart was pounding at every second. At first, I wanted this to be a novel. Heck, I still do. I do have ...

The first thing I noticed about this poem is clearly the translation to the first Latin phrase every child should know since they attend a lot of magic shows or ...

This poem has a very interesting rhyme scheme. At first, I thought you broke the pattern, but it took me a while to realize what the pattern was, which made ...

This poem is so peaceful that while I was about to fall asleep while reading (It's not boring at all. I'm sorry if it sounded like that). If this were ...

First off, I am very, very sorry for your loss. I know how it feels to lose someone very, very, very, extremely close to you in the worst way possible. ...

I like how the first two-thirds of this poem seems to rhyme, but the rest just became flat. I spotted a few grammar errors, too, but you don't have to ...

Normally, I don't like everything being lowercase, but this poem doesn't look so bad after looking at it, but I would uppercase names of people and places like "alabama." There ...

Very heartbreaking this is. Honestly, this remains me of a very bad relationship I was in in the past year. In the beginning, it was great, but as soon as ...

Whoa! First of all, it was work to keep up with the format of this poem, but you made it interesting by places the lines in different spots. Second, the ...

This reminds me of my parents. Well, I'm from Jersey, and Jersians are the only people who can drink coffee at any time of the day. I can imagine how ...

This looks like a very good beginning; however, more details wouldn't hurt to make the prologue more interesting. More details are what people want to see. Believe it or not, ...

This poem is so smooth that I can read this without a problem. At first, I was a little confused on what the story was about, but then I took ...

Yay! New chapter. The first thing I noticed was linked words that lead to the top of the page again? I don't know how that happened, but that's not what ...

This is an interesting format for poetry. I wouldn't usually put it in paragraph form, but as I'm reading this, the poem has made it more interesting. After the thunderstorms ...

"I stopped thinking about the traffic; however, as my attention turned to the car itself..." "It must have cost thousands." "Well, after high school, I took up a course in ...