cbwriterchick

This was great. I can feel your emotion as you write it. That could be because I'm in your possition.... Anyways! I loved this poem because it projects feelings that ...

This was really good! My favorite part, because I think most people (if not, just me because I'm crazy) can relate to it is the "Did you hear my give ...

That was really good, but I still have a few questions. as the author, are you talking to your friend telling them to kiss him, or to yourself convincing yourself ...

OK, this was good, but I do have a few questions. first of all, how did your friend know the person before you. second, why did the person come up ...

I really liked this. The repitition can be kind of.... repetitive. saying 'i love you' over and over got a little boring (im sorry to say), but i can see ...

I really loved this. my favorite part was the "With a deep breath I do the hardest thing I've ever had to do Without a backward glance I walk away ...

That was the most amazingly beautiful, if something that dark can be considered beautiful, I loved it. I am a young writer (13 years) and reading that inspires me to ...