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Re: storms
Hello there ! I adored your poem. It's amazing. I love the elegance that flows throughout, even the harsh truths of our lives seem so beautiful for a moment in ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: My body became binary code
Hello Mister ! Your work is marvelous. I can not really express how I feel. Through out the time I was reading it, my hand was on my chest. I ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Deceptions
Hello there ! Well honestly, now I realise how much I have yet to learn from my fellow writers like you on writing a piece like this. I like that ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Her Name was Ecstasy... she died
Hello ! This was great. Short stories are my favourites because they unleash a whole lot of thoughts swirling in the reader's mind, million different approaches of what could have ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Cold flesh upon Steel
Hey ! This indeed is splendid. Mate, you're 14 and you can write something so well as this, incredible. I loved "the pure ichor" throughout the poem. And I loved ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Honey
Hello there ! This is a piece of beauty. I am in love with it. I can not help but fall in love with it. The fashion of description writing ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: The Oblivion of Fear
Hello there ! I must say, that is terrific. First of all, the use of the words, show a nice range of vocabulary, which is not easy, usage of very ...
Dec 17, 2014