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oh, very dark, like the night. It makes me want to laugh evilly.

not a masterpiece, but still a work of art! It has a everyday life feel to it. Like, say, you were just eating breakfast. (haha) Anyway I get a homey ...

WICKED. Love the irony of the title! It's just so dark and creepy! give me a twisting feeling in my gut! powerful stuff. Fantastic poem! ( I believe you mean ...

The story is moving, but it seems kind of rushed to me. Maybe add more details or something, to help transition from place to place. The best tittle I can ...

I like the creativity of the metaphors! I haven't seen something like this before! Certainly unique! I also like how it's straight forward, not meandering, better to get the point ...

Whoa. Great poem. It makes me sad, but I can envision it in my head and I can feel the emotions going through it. It also has some deep points ...

It gave me chills! And now I feel the urge to look over my shoulder! It's creepy in the most fantastic way ever! If you keep writing like this I ...

I love this story. It's just so real, and I love how you got all of this complex stuff to fit in a short story!I think it's incredible!

Great, now I'm hooked. I want to read more. I know these should be more of a critique with pros and cons and constructive criticism, but all I can think ...

This is a great poem! I completely agree with it! America's history is so blood stained it's hard to tell what we are celebrating on the 4th of July. Here ...

Breath-taking. There are tears in my eyes, and now I'm sad, but that's good. Because a poem causing emotions is truly magnificent. Beautiful poem.

I like the poem! The title is kind of.....off a bit. But the poem is fantastic, and very, as you say, simple, but in a good way!It flows well. I ...

I like it! The words form a picture in my head and the lines give me something to think about!I can't nit-pick because you used some word I didn't even ...