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Gee..thanks!!! I will make sure that I read it..!

I think it will be easy to recognize if you italicize it.

This prose... actually sums up what I feel about others... However, you think of others in such a way and you empathize with them but they do not get that. ...

Hiiiii!!! its me cathe! I know I took a lot of time. I was doing something else too. Anyways, to your story. I felt that as you said you have ...

Your writing is awesome and flawless. Your comparisons and description of the situation is so vivid and elaborate that makes it so powerful. Keep up the good work!

Its an short and sweet poem with a "punch on your face" message. An artistic reminder of how our world is so imperfect.. I loved it! Just no words..

planetary geologist... thats interesting! I just put the picture because I liked it. haha!

I loved the last few lines.. so true! I think its cute and sweet essay just to remind us everyday how fortunate we are to have someone to love and ...

I love fairy tales! I am 17 but fairy tales still fascinate me. However I think you should include more twist and turns in the story to escape a little ...

Is this story incomplete? I find it without any plot that gives readers anything to be interested about.

Thanx for the review

thanks for you comment! I had a big doubt whether to end with a question or not. You cleared it! I really love science and I have made my own ...

Thanks! I am a bit bad at grammar!