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Re: You Are Stronger
I usually don't like "rhymey" poems, but this works! I only have a couple comments. The last paragraph, I think you should do away with. It's a little cheesy; I ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: High School Realationships
This is perfect. And so sadly true. Being a girl in high school, I know how hard relationships are, especially with awkward teenage boys, who you're right, are only in ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: Boredom Song (with 1/2 tsp love)
THIS IS NOT A F****** AWFUL POEM. You have such an elegant way of taking something that really hurts and really sucks, and turning it into something beautiful and emotional. ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: The Sun Won't Come Out Tomorrow
This is a dreadfully sad story. Not really like a mellowdramatic teen story, but just - wow, super sad. It definetly has a lot of potential, but I feel like ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: I Shot Santa Claus in Self-Defense
I am IN LOVE with this! I am actually sitting here with like the biggest smile on my face - this is awesome. I've never read a story like this ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: Pretty Denial
It's pretty - I just think it's too soft spoken. Like you said, I understand it was written quickly, but I it's lacking a depth that as I reader I ...
Sep 29, 2014