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  • Poetry » General, General Re: No Love Story for the Loner

    Review :D This is a great poem. It had great rhyme. It really made the reader connect to the character. Great work, keep it up! Now for some additional things ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Broken Beyond Repair: Prologue

    Review :D This prologue is an interesting start to this story. You can really get a grasp on what the character is feeling. I noticed that there was great detail, ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Sadness And Sorrow

    Review :D Hello, I want to start of by saying this poem is very true. It might just be me because I like realistic stories, but I think it makes ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Walk Past the Graveyard

    Review :D I think this is a beautiful piece of literature. It is something that I can read multiple times, and it still have meaning. I think that this deserves ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Lyrics » Humor, Lyrical Re: She's An Extra Terrestrial!

    Review, :D this song was fantastic and well written. I could feel the what the character was going through. My favorite part of this poem was this line: She's an ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Chasing Clouds

    review, I loved this poem because it was beautiful and written well. I wanted to mention that I love the title of the poem, it captures the readers attention. I ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: Here in the Dark

    Review :) Positives 1. I loved the idea of the poem. 2. It has some good descriptions. 3. The poem had a great flow. Negatives 1. words were repeated a ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    review :D for starters this is a great poem, the detail is good Positives this poem captures the readers attention, it's dark. when I first started reading this I thought ...

    Jun 30, 2014


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings