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Re: No Love Story for the Loner
Review :D This is a great poem. It had great rhyme. It really made the reader connect to the character. Great work, keep it up! Now for some additional things ...
Aug 22, 2014 -
Re: Broken Beyond Repair: Prologue
Review :D This prologue is an interesting start to this story. You can really get a grasp on what the character is feeling. I noticed that there was great detail, ...
Aug 22, 2014 -
Re: Sadness And Sorrow
Review :D Hello, I want to start of by saying this poem is very true. It might just be me because I like realistic stories, but I think it makes ...
Aug 22, 2014 -
Re: A Walk Past the Graveyard
Review :D I think this is a beautiful piece of literature. It is something that I can read multiple times, and it still have meaning. I think that this deserves ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: She's An Extra Terrestrial!
Review, :D this song was fantastic and well written. I could feel the what the character was going through. My favorite part of this poem was this line: She's an ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: Chasing Clouds
review, I loved this poem because it was beautiful and written well. I wanted to mention that I love the title of the poem, it captures the readers attention. I ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Here in the Dark
Review :) Positives 1. I loved the idea of the poem. 2. It has some good descriptions. 3. The poem had a great flow. Negatives 1. words were repeated a ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: I remember that one time...
review :D for starters this is a great poem, the detail is good Positives this poem captures the readers attention, it's dark. when I first started reading this I thought ...
Jun 30, 2014