casey_kent

I liked it. Although you are making it figurative poetry, you know what I mean. Put the words into nice stanzas. Don't make them like what you did. Keep it ...

I liked the message. It was good. But I don't think you consider this as a poem. Maybe you can make this longer and post it in the Romantic Fiction ...

AAAAWWWWWWWWW. A very cute poem. o loved it! I can feel the emotions. And a very nice message. Really cute!!

I liked it really. But you gotta edit some errors though. And the title should be, HE LOVES HER. not HE LOVE'S HER. The message of the poem is good.

It was a little difficult to understand but when I read it again I kind of understood the meaning of the whole poem. It is very interesting. Keep writing!!

I liked this a lot. It's really nice and I can feel the emotions of the characters especially the girl. I'm looking forward to read more of this.

Nice message. A lot of strong feelings and emotions. I like this. It's really nice. :))

Short but really strong. It was nice. I liked it a lot! Good job :D

The poem is very strong. There is a lot of meaning and emotion in it. Keep it up.

Hey next chapter please cuz. Get a good agent to publish this thang, ayt? Love it. Now post the next chapters.

your poem has a nice message. But I think your over used the phrase 'This is the child'. Maybe you can change it. Make the whole poem, not boring but ...

Again.. I loved it so much. I cant stop reading it over and over again!! ♥♥♥

This is hilarious!! :))

This is freakin' awesome!! I loved it! If i were you teacher and you did this for a project, I'd give you a AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA++++++++. You should make this a TV ...

It was nice. I liked it. I wish I had some guy to do all those for me:)