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Re: My Muse
I really liked this. The first stanza was really great!
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: In My Dreams
I loved it! I loved the way you used imagery and figurative language. Great Job!
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: Steal!
I liked it. They rhyming was cute and I think that it really fits in the poem.
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: But You Can't See In
I read poems to be enlightened. I read them to see what might other people feel. ---------- I liked your poem. I like the way you interpreted it in words. ...
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Re: women
I loved it! Well done. You go girl!
Apr 1, 2008 -
Re: insomnia
oooh. Insomnia. My grandma has that sickness.
Apr 1, 2008 -
Re: Make this Last Forever (Hallelujah Sequel)
I liked it. It's very nice.
Apr 1, 2008 -
Re: Dreamed of Hell
Good poem. It was nice!
Apr 1, 2008 -
Re: The Serpent(warning this may hurt......)
I liked it. I like the way you used figurative language. I can feel the emotion of the poem. Very good!
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Frozen In Time
It's nice. I think I saw the meaning. The circle in the middle was supposed to be the thing that is frozen and the words are the time or it's ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Do not Enter
I loved it. I agree with you. I don't like people invading my own privacy. The rhyming was really good and it flowed well. Keep it up!
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: My world
I loved your poem. I like poems like these. Your poem flowed real well. The rhyming was awesome. It totally fits.
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Mother Nature's Son
I liked this poem. I like the concept and the idea of it too.
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Underappreciated
Hmm, nail cutters? Well, I liked your poem. It was clever. I agree that they are not appreciated but they are well-needed. So sad. Welcome to YWS!
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: My heart is yours
I loved it. I love the way you used figurative language in it. Although I found some errors that need some fixing.
Mar 31, 2008
