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This is really quite good.

Well, that's a blast from the past. Thanks for the review!

Nono he patched up the hole in his ceiling. Otherwise, thank you for the review. I take "insane" as a great compliment. c: All is meant to be taken at ...

January 25th was intentionally left blank. Thank you for the review!

@Messenger: The game is called "Submachine", google it, there are more than 8 of them and they can be played for free. Quite a good series of games. @Nate: Thank ...

Hmm... Could you point out the problematic lines? I also get this sort of vibe from this piece, but I can't narrow them down.

I see you've added a pre-lude, clearing my some of my earlier confusion. Glad to see it.

Sweet mother of god, this hit me like a train. Like + follow.

Uh, there's no story, just a survey.

Sirens, sirens, all gone now. In their place, a torn up town. Maybe that is better? Otherwise, excellent.

I've been looking at old pieces I've reviewed, and happened upon this review here. In the spirit of our plots workshop, where I suggested that the "Reply to review" function ...

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I just don't get how you can hate people who've done nothing to you as a Christian.

I'm not sure whether to read this as a heartbreak poem or as a BDSM poem. It works both ways, really.

too short