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Re: Scenes in Walmart
For as long as I live, I will never forget this poem
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Revisiting Abracadabra
"Stolid" is a word. Google is at your fingertips.
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: Ash
Thanks for the review. Keep in mind, though, that this piece is seven years old (and it's been on this website for 5). I don't really have any recent writing, ...
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: The Valley and the Mountain
Just a couple of notes: when I brought up science fiction, rags to riches, etc, I meant genre fiction as opposed to a story about a story, a meta-story, about ...
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: XY
Your pieces give me something interesting to chew on. My coming to your pieces is entirely your fault for not being a terrible writer.
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: The Thing About The Cold
Huh? I guess I agree...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: Doing It
It was this salty, heavy smell and all I could think about was that time in 7th grade when I’d gone into the boy’s locker room by mistake, which was ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Abandoned
This isn't a monologue, internal or external.
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: 7:34
I doubted you, but I doubt you no longer
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: The Orange Tree [First Draft]
Not bad
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Like a Citrus
In that case, consider the differences between a novel and a short story. A novel's individual chapters may indeed depend on previous installments. A short story should be self-contained, enjoyed ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: A Cigarette Man
Okay, that was pretty good. I may come back here for a more thorough review.
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Young Writers Society: School of Hard Knocks
Because writing popular short stories is harder than writing popular kitsch.
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Ten Reasons Why Nate Is Afraid Of Lampposts
Why?
Oct 17, 2015 -
Re: From Stars to the Fireplace
Thank you for the kind words! The third poem was a literal true story. I dreamt of a fight with an ex, and when I woke up, I found out ...
Oct 3, 2015
