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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Scenes in Walmart

    For as long as I live, I will never forget this poem

    Jul 7, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Revisiting Abracadabra

    "Stolid" is a word. Google is at your fingertips.

    Dec 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Ash

    Thanks for the review. Keep in mind, though, that this piece is seven years old (and it's been on this website for 5). I don't really have any recent writing, ...

    Dec 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: The Valley and the Mountain

    Just a couple of notes: when I brought up science fiction, rags to riches, etc, I meant genre fiction as opposed to a story about a story, a meta-story, about ...

    Dec 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: XY

    Your pieces give me something interesting to chew on. My coming to your pieces is entirely your fault for not being a terrible writer.

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: The Thing About The Cold

    Huh? I guess I agree...

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Doing It

    It was this salty, heavy smell and all I could think about was that time in 7th grade when I’d gone into the boy’s locker room by mistake, which was ...

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Abandoned

    This isn't a monologue, internal or external.

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: 7:34

    I doubted you, but I doubt you no longer

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Orange Tree [First Draft]

    Not bad

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Like a Citrus

    In that case, consider the differences between a novel and a short story. A novel's individual chapters may indeed depend on previous installments. A short story should be self-contained, enjoyed ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: A Cigarette Man

    Okay, that was pretty good. I may come back here for a more thorough review.

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Humor Re: Young Writers Society: School of Hard Knocks

    Because writing popular short stories is harder than writing popular kitsch.

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Other » Humor, Other Re: Ten Reasons Why Nate Is Afraid Of Lampposts

    Why?

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: From Stars to the Fireplace

    Thank you for the kind words! The third poem was a literal true story. I dreamt of a fight with an ex, and when I woke up, I found out ...

    Oct 3, 2015


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