User avatar

captainmichael15

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Mind of an Analyst

    I must admit that I do not read poetry all that often, so this review may not be what you are looking for in terms of feedback. Nevertheless, I found ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Instant: Prologue

    Usually when a story ends in that all the events throughout it were only a dream, it is a boring and easy way to end a story. But it was ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Anamika Chapter 1: Unlocking the Door

    I like this, but I am sort of conflicted on whether or not I am comfortable reading it. Don't get me wrong, the story seems like it will be awesome! ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, Humor Re: Cold Coffee

    I found this very funny, and a pretty much accurate representation of a simply bad day. It is a little silly, but why take the fun out of writing by ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: John the Cowboy Part 1 out of 4

    Definitely an interesting start to a character. I see a lot of potential in John being a great main character for a larger story. A run down man who has ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Water Men

    Very interesting short. The feel of it was well built up, and the separation from Ellie truly made me feel how much Jacob cared for her. The thing about magnesium ...

    Apr 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Persistence will be Heard

    I really enjoyed this. I thought that you're characters, even though they spoke very little, felt so human that I was very impressed you were able to do it in ...

    Apr 29, 2015


coffee and writing is a superior duo
— LadyBug