captain.classy

Stella! Okay, now that that's over... I got chills while reading this. I think you conveyed a beautiful message here. You spoke like a true transcendentalist. You described nature for ...

Whilst he had been standing like a melon with his hands raised and his face weeping with blood, Carter had just stood there. I feel like the ‘stood’ should be ...

I love you! hahaha Okay, here I go: Classic Digimon, Sonic, and Kirby too A comma after 'Kirby' I am from four smelly brothers Leaving unnecessary gas around the house ...

Be afraid, I'm going to just sit here and talk. So, you intrigued me by your title. I was like "hey! this should be interesting," but, to me, you didn't ...

Under a tree I sat in late July ‘Twas night, and I looked at the gleaming sky The fireflies did fly, and the night cool, I thought of that fair ...

So I would just like to point out here that this is a very common subject to write on. And, no offence, but your poem, the phrases you used were ...

Wow. It's over! I can't believe it's over. I don't think this is a bad chapter at all. I think you did everything you could to end the story, and, ...

Mage! Okay: Haven't enough died already? So this is the only thing that set me off (haha). You are asking him to come home because you don't want him to ...

Oh goodness. I'm so scared for those two, it's indescribable. So, again, you have left me with no grammatical errors to correct. Boo! haha Your action scenes are priceless. The ...

You are a beautiful writer. I only read halfway through, but in that half, I wanted more between her and Triston. Their chemistry just makes me want to hop out ...

Wow. Okay, I am surprised you have only one other review. This story was so well written and such a pleasure to read! Okay, so I don't have any nit-picks, ...

Classy here! Mistakes?? I did not feel relieved by the news nor did I feel even remotely happy by it,instead I felt hot, thick tears of anger swell up inside ...

Hiya! On to my review. I would just like to point out one thing before I drone on about how much I liked this: At first, Victoire had sold her ...

Woah! Haha, this was really good. I couldn't get myself to move my eyes away as I was reading. Hmm, I didn't notice any obvious mistakes. I only have one ...

Also the way of traveling was also my favorite. So, you do this quite a lot in your story, and I wanted to point it out to you. There are ...