captain.classy

Very interesting story, but I will say that you are moving too fast. I think you should have at least one more encounter with Eric before she just up and ...

Woah. You have finally written the story that I have nothing to correct! haha just kidding. Okay: I took in a breath before answering. Usually I don’t say anything about ...

“Nothing oh grumpy one.” I mutter ed , sw ing on my heels and continu ing my lonesome journey. So you changed tenses here. The 'ing's are present, and the ...

Poisoned by pity, compassion, guilt, love, I would say: ... compassion, guilt, and love." It just seems to flow better. I don't really get why you call them crocodile tears. ...

Hmm... what to say about this. I want to start out saying your descriptions are wonderful. When you were commenting on the snow hitting the lone wolf's fur, I could ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you. So many poems on this site have a problem with sticking with their centrel theme till the very end, but you did. You pretty ...

Peole think could never relate I think you meant 'people.' I think you need to add more poetic phrases to this. Such as, what colors were the eyes? Maybe relate ...

I agree with the above. The poem flows very well, and I much enjoyed reading it. There was a certain original twist to it. I only noticed one thing: Warrior, ...

‘...Such a word does not exist in this realm.’ oo. *chills* It was also just the right size for slipping in her rations, consisting of stale bread and spiritless wine ...

I'm starting to wish that we still had old fashioned televisions I'm sorry to say that this does not fit in with the letter. The writer seems to be in ...

I find it impossible to do a serious review on this! Why do you stand there and just Moo? Moo shouldn't be capitalized. I think you are funny, but I ...

I like the concept. I like how you showed us the two very different opinions of these two very different people. What I don't like is the rhyming scheme, and ...

I saw you quite recently, In fact it was less then a week, I really don't like the second use of these lines. They make your poem sound like a ...

This is going to start sounding like a list. I really like your idea, I don't like the use of parenthesis. They are not very poetic, and are not needed. ...

As vividly as the night-time sky. I really like this line. It really ties everything that you are saying together. I would like you to end with the 'great minds ...