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Re: "Corruption, Materialism, and the American Dream in The Great Gatsby: A Reflection of the Roaring Twenties"
Hai :3 Okay, so I love how you're diving into The Great Gatsby and weaving in the themes of materialism, gender inequality, and broken relationships!! It's one of my favorites, ...
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Re: childhood hallucinations
Hai :3 I wrote a review for this, but I forgot to submit it!! Oopsie!! This poem is so nostalgic and achingly tender!! The foggy memory and the haze of ...
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Re: consume me
Hai :3 This poem is so intense!! I could feel the ache radiating from the words!! The visceral hunger in this poem is palpable. Like, you didn’t just write about ...
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Re: Supraorbital
Hai :3 This poem is soooo hauntingly beautiful and raw!! Like, the whole archaeological metaphor throughout is stunning!!! You're digging through layers of emotion and history like it's not just ...
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Re: i keep inviting death into my life
Hai :3 I love this so much!! The way you play with imagery here is so evocative!! I’m absolutely living for how you intertwine myth and memory ~~ Like, with ...
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Re: Anastasia and her grandmother's daisies
Hai :3 This is so pretty!! It’s tender, nostalgic, and packed with imagery that makes me feel like I’m right there with you watching the night unfold from that little ...
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Re: kodokushi
Hai :3 I love this poem!! It's like pursuing something elusive, something that promises value, but rarely delivers. It’s almost a perfect metaphor for modern existence, right? ~~ Like, we’re ...
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Re: the teachings of a wise maple tree
Hai :3 I love this poem so much!! The way you write about nature feels like it has this deep sense of life and interconnectedness, like you’re really tapping into ...
Sep 22, 2024 -
Re: 🕰️🧸 Jason’s love for Laughing Jack 🧸🕰️
Hai :3 First off, I have to say I am not familiar with the source here!! I'd really like to review this though, so I just won't comment on the ...
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Re: Like A Doll
Hai :3 I love the raw, emotional power of this piece!! The way it builds up with each body part, like we’re slowly unraveling this overwhelming sense of isolation and ...
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Re: disposable cup
Hai :3 I started writing a review for this before, but I forgot to finish it!! I have some free time now, so I might as well do it!! It's ...
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Re: Your name is pressed on my collar
Hai :3 This is so intense and gut-wrenching!! The metaphor of being like a dog throughout the poem is so powerful, and it really emphasizes that unbreakable loyalty, even when ...
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Re: Me Time..
Hai :3 I love this poem so much!! It resonates with that deep, soul-stirring longing for identity and space, and the structure of it really adds to that!! The bolded ...
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Re: (Ode) The Old Paris
Hai :3 I love this!! This poem is so nostalgic!! The way you’ve woven Paris’s past and present into a conversation with the city itself is so perfect. I love ...
Sep 21, 2024 -
Re: A Love that Swallows Me Whole
Hai :3 You're killing it with the poetry!! It's like I'm always reading something from you!! Like here, this is soooo powerful!! I’m in love with the way you capture ...
Sep 21, 2024
