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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Boy That Plays With My Heart #1

    I love this very much! Just like all your works! You do a great job at expressing her anger, and his confusion! You leave me wanting so much more! Private ...

    Jun 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Untitled Prologue

    Your prologue is very foreshadowing and leaves me wanting more, I love it! You leave the reader on a very confusing cliff hanger! Write more! quickly!! And don't forget to ...

    Jun 2, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dawn Reports 7

    Your work never lets me down! :D I was inspired by this piece. And I hope to one day find my passion. I have allot of hobbies, but none seem ...

    May 16, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dawn Reports 6

    Yet again you make me smile as I read! :D I say this to everyone! It IS what keeps us going, unless we let go of it. those are the ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dawn Reports 5

    Again, you never let me down with your work! This really appeals to me because it really speaks of what I believe and think day to day. Don't you ever ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dawn Reports 2.5

    Every time I open your work, I get satisfied once again, more every time. This work really interest me greatly because this is a flaw of many people who say ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dawn Reports 2

    Again, you weave such a beautiful piece of art that inspires and moves me. I wish I had the talent like yours to create something as this. Keep writing like ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dawn Reports 1

    I really love this piece of art you created. You speak the truth and you can inspire many great people with your words. I was inspired and moved by the ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Stay Forever [Chapter Three]

    I love your story!! please write more!! I really cant wait for what happens next! Private message me when you update your amazing work of art!! With love, -Lily

    May 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Stay Forever [Chapter Two]

    Dear friend, I really like your story, sorry for the long wait on the review. I like how you used the ironic factor in the surprise birthday. keep up the ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Have To End It

    I really like your poem! You really catch the essence of the ' Dramatic poem' part. I think you do a great job with expressing the narrator's feelings and emotions. ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Forever&Always #1

    i surprisingly like the story, though I do believe sex outside of marriage is wrong. Its surprising that I like it. And I do like the unusual twist of the ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Forever&Always #Prologue

    I really like the sound of this story! It's really sweet and foreshadowing and leaves on a edge with curiosity. I really like the names of your characters, especially Lilliana ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: In The Dark - Chapter 5

    I love your story!! You do a great job at explaining the feelings of the main character and it is amazing how much imagination you must have to create such ...

    Apr 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: In The Dark - Chapter 4

    Thank you so much for Private messaging me and posting more! I don't want to miss a single thing of this amazing story!n I love your creativity and your talent ...

    Apr 23, 2010


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