First off let me begin with saying thank you to all those who have read my previous work. This report is the completion to Dawn Reports 2. My last thoughts, and possibly most important, is simply: acceptance and personal core values. Accept that there are those who do not agree with your thoughts and don't be afraid to think despite others contradiction. However, its important to remember that while you think freely regardless of others is to stay true to your values and morals. Judgment can become cloudy when one begins immense them self in thought. Pondering deeply in any subject is vital for those who wish to better themselves in understanding, but at the same time such people can lose who they truly are by becoming someone who their not. Anything from losing friends to losing faith. Now I'm not passing judgement toward those who do not believe in God. I'm merely saying to know who you are and know what and who you love before you begin to think. In short tread carefully and be prepared on subjects that are important to you. I do apologize if I have offended anyone, and I know this report was a little different. As always love to hear what you have to say. Leave comments, reviews, et cetera down below.
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Every time I open your work, I get satisfied once again, more every time. This work really interest me greatly because this is a flaw of many people who say they don't, you should have your own part of the newspaper for your Dawn reports. They would open the eyes of many authors around the world!!
Your humble admirer,
- Lily <3
I think this was the best so far. I like that you kindly expressed your thoughts which are very meaningful, and something you could live by.
I really enjoyed reading this, sir! It's very true and completely honest. It's clear that you've put some real thought into this, and I applaud you for that!
And don't ever think that you couldn't say something like this on YWS, because a lot of people say things a thousand times worse, and with half the thought behind it.
-Knightley
Very good, sir. No one will condemn you for this.
It's interesting to see that you refer to God in your writing.
Are you pointing to Jehovah in this?