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- I like this poem! :D Ha! But I am confused about this kind of pattern. I like the descriptive poem itself, but I think I am really comfortable with ...

in my own opinion, you've got no problem on how you send your message through this poem- the thing is about the rhyming... O.o you used different patterns here... When ...

--> Aww! Did you know how I hate those little critters (arachids) ?? Err- well, except butterflies. XD geez, anyway, I think your poem's really good and I don't really ...

Hi, Spike! You know what? I could imagine Jesus Christ telling this to his Father, God. :O Yes, every bit of your poem, I could relate it to him, especially ...

--> Hello! Love this poem so much! You even included Cinderella, Snow White, Rapunzel and Sleeping beauty! :D --> I don't think I have to say a critique, I think ...

HellO! Just dropped by to say that I really like this! Don't wanna critique anymore- since the other YWSers had given them. So, I'm here to say how great this ...

:D The others gave the corrections already, so I hope you'll consider them. :D This poem will be a good one, just a little tweaking on the typos/ mistakes. :D ...

--> wow! *clap-hands* you are truly great! :) So sure that if your "inspiration" read this- he/she will be so happy! *thumbs-up* Good job!

--> I really like this (although I don't have a situation like that) before I had, but it was over. Enough about the tidbits of my life. :D --> I ...

--> title fits for the poem. :) --> I also like the story, but not the ending :'( so sad, so sad. --> It still kept me hanging, like, what ...

--> hello! first of all, I'll tell you, you are one of my fave poets here on YWS. :D read Morgan's lullaby etc. and now, "My Whispers On The Ocean". ...

I like this poem! That's all! :) (the guys already gave the reviews) :D

--> Hello! :D like your composition anyway! Astig! :D ahaha! That's all- I hope you'd compose more!!

--> wow! you should know that this poem is so fantastic. :) and I like the rhythm, message and everything! :O owh- :D zahh :) mm!!

--> awesome story! wow! wow! wow! If you only knew how i loved the abductor and hated the girl! :3 soo good! :)