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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mementos of a Life We Used to Live

    Hi Sparkles, thank you so much for the review! The repetition of "Dear" was intended to read as notes/letters (the mementos) the speaker is writing to their lover. Now that ...

    Jul 14, 2026
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To my Daughter

    Thank you so much!! I don’t personally have kids but I feel like this would be my way of saying welcome~ Also! I checked out some of your poetry, oh ...

    Jul 12, 2026
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To my Daughter

    Thank you so much! I got too excited with the assonance and alliteration haha! I was wondering if it came off a bit too wordy- especially in the first stanza ...

    Jul 11, 2026
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To my Daughter

    Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it hehe

    Jul 11, 2026
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love me like i love the moon

    aa thank you so much! im glad you enjoyed it! :)

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love me like i love the moon

    Thank you so much!!

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love me like i love the moon

    Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it hehe :)

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love me like i love the moon

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the moon phases concept hehe. For the misspelling, "acrid" is defined as having an unpleasant taste or smell :) ...

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love me like i love the moon

    Thank you for the review! All good for being nitpicky!! Haha it was actually intentional, "acrid" is defined as having an unpleasant taste or smell. But thank you so much ...

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: earl grey

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: earl grey

    Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Also thank you for the interpretation! It's awesome hearing other people's perspectives hehe

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: If Only

    of course!

    Nov 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Over the Edge of a Cliff (How I feel doing Election Week)

    of course!!

    Nov 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: is this what nostalgia feels like?

    Thank you so much for the review!! As for the capitalization, it was a stylistic choice but thankful nonetheless :)

    Nov 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: is this what nostalgia feels like?

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate that you shared your interpretation! :)

    Nov 5, 2020


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