burninhell

Elloha! Guess who? Okay, no need I've got to finish this story so you arent getting rid of me just yet. :D Okay, so as always nitpicks first, fandom after. ...

Ello again! Just me, your friendly neighborhood story stalker.... Again. Okay, one single iccle nitpick this time because everything else look fantastico to me! So, in this paragraph here: "Now ...

Ello! Me again. So this probably isn't going to be a long review because... well.... I Loved It... Again!!!! And other than me having a little bit of a chat ...

Hiya! So, a slightly late stalk of your portfolio revealed this little piece of amazingness! Why oh why you didnt make me read this.... *sigh* I've been missing out. Ahh ...

Hai! Okay Whooo, new chapter! Okay, so review time. I'll do nitpicky things first and then have a little ramble on about all the things I liked! :D So, here ...

Ello! Okay, so I loved this! I'm just going to get the nitpicks out of the way first and then we can get to all the stuff that I thought ...

Hey! Okay, so I'm gonna start off by agreeing with Reikann. I'd definitely post this piece chapter by chapter, it would make it a lot easier for people to review. ...

Ello! Okay, so I'm going to get the nitpicks out of the way first before I get to the good stuff :) So here goes he then throws the piece ...

Hello!! Just thought I'd stop by with a quick review. Okay, so I'm going to get nitpicks out of the way first and then I'll talk about the parts I ...

Hello!!! Now lets get down to reviewing this fantabulous chapter you have here! I'm going to get my nitpicks out of the way first so that I can have a ...

Ello! I LOVED THIS!!!! Oh my gosh, your plot is amazing and I wanna know what happens next and I loved it so much!!! Okay, I'm gonna get down to ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS!!! Okay, so I just thought I would stop by with a review for you. So first, I'm going to suggest improvements, and then we can get ...

Hey Leek! So a review. Your piece is quite short so my review probably will be too. But, I loved it!!! Okay, suggestions before I get to the good stuff ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Okay, so I'm just stopping by with a review. I'm going to kick this off by getting all the nitpicks out of the way so that ...

Hello! So, let's get down to this review. I'm going to get the nitpicks out of the way first, and then we can get to the good stuff :) Okay, ...