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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Fallen Leaves Chapter One: Do It For Him

    Hiya! Kind of a month late to the welcome party but welcome to YWS! Okay, so lets get down to giving you a review shall we? I'm going to run ...

    Dec 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Four- Chapter four

    Hiya! So this review comes a few days later than I had planned, but we got there in the end. Okay, so I'm not sure that I have much to ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Huntress- Chapter 2: Pride (Book 1 in the Wolfsbane Chronicles)

    Hiya! Me again... But anyways, I'm here with a review for your chapter two. Okay, so as with last time I'm going to run through nitpicks first and then get ...

    Nov 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Huntress, Chapter 1: Pack (Book 1 in the Wolfsbane Chronicles)

    Hello! Thought that I'd stop by with a quick review for this great chapter of yours. I'm going to go through a few nitpicks first, but then I'll get to ...

    Nov 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Four- Chapter three

    Hey Ashling! I haven't reviewed in a while, and getting back into it with this seems like a pretty good idea to me :) As always I shall get the ...

    Nov 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 10

    Why hello there! Wowza, were those fireworks, because that is how you make a grand return! Okay, so here goes, I'm gonna go through a couple of nitpicks before I ...

    Oct 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: The Chase Chapter one: The boy

    Hi! Belated welcome to YWS! Hope you're enjoying it here. :) Okay, so lets get down to it. I'm going to get through the nitpicks before we get to the ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Stolen Secrets: Chapter 1 Part 2

    Hey! Slightly belated welcome to YWS! Okay so, lets get down to it, I'm gonna run through nitpicks first and then get to the good stuffs :) So, here goes. ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Annabelle, Intro+Chapter 1

    Hi! Welcome to YWS! So, I'm going to be writing a review for your chapter here. I'm going to do nitpicks first, and then we can get to the good ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Coming War/Chp. 1/ Rowan

    Hi! So I'm just stopping by with a review for this awesome chapter you have here. So, I'm going to do nitpicks first and then get to all the things ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Dizzy

    Hey, me again! I'm going to do this the same as the last review and do nitpicks first and then get to the awesomeness! Okay so, I'm guessing that this ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Correlations - Prologue

    Hey Plaguewritings! So, I'm just stopping for a quick review before I move on to your next chapter. Okay, so first off I'm going to get all the nitpicks out ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: When a Bird Sings chapter 7

    Hey! It's me... Again! :) Okay, so I'll do this one the same as the others, the nitpicks first and then to the good stuffs. Okie soo: picked up the ...

    Aug 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 6

    Ermigawd!!! The ship! The ship must sail! Hi by the way xD Sooooooo, you were definitely right when you said that I would love this chapter!!! Oh my gosh, the ...

    Aug 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 3, 4 & 5

    Erro! So this is the last one (but only because it's the last thing you have posted!) Soooo, here we go! The morning came early for James as he staggered ...

    Jul 31, 2016


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