bullhead21

Listen, as an Individual writer, I feel obligated to write what makes me content. Not to be the best at what I do, not to please anyone, not to gain ...

there is a typo..the line "end with a stare" should be under "Our rare affair has"

I have to agree the first two line aren't the best and I was having a hard time putting it together! and yes I was thinking of putting "each others ...

I can't change the format on the website... I don't know why

oh crap...this is so stupid but the website changed the format i had typed it in!!

I really like this poem!!!!

I know I can't write poetry I just write whatever makes sense to me but thanks for your advice

I like the fact that you have made it personal...it's adorable

:) It's not really sad..it's has a more liberating tone

It's a great piece...from my point of view, it's appealing to what I am going through!

Thank you for the feed back! It's not really a poem but I didn't know what category to put it but I like the way you broke it up :)