bubblewrapped

Thanks :) I'm not on YWS much anymore (I no longer qualify as a "young" writer lol), but it's always nice to hear from people that they like my old ...

Hi again, Nice to see some editing going on :) I like this version; there is a clear progression in each verse, and they each add something new to the ...

For someone who seldom (never?) writes poetry, you do seem to have a good grasp of the basics :) Class assignments can sometimes make for rather stiff work, so it ...

Edited to add a rating. Please remember to rate your work correctly in the future. Cheers, ~bubbles

Edited to add a rating. Please be sure to rate your work appropriately in future. Thanks :) Cheers, ~bubbles

Edited to add a rating. Please try to remember to rate your poetry in the future. Thanks :) Cheers, ~bubbles

Hey there, welcome to YWS. I've moved this into Other Fiction for you as I don't really think it fits in poetry. Cheers, ~bubbles

Moved to the Lyric section for you. Lyric Poetry is slightly different :) Cheers, ~bubbles

Moved to Lyrics for you. Also suggest you change the word "Soal" in the title to its correct spelling. Cheers :)

Wow, that was good. As in, scarily good. I don't really have much to say in the way of a critique except that I love the way you reprised the ...

I still love those books, but I have to admit, the last one wasn't quite as good as the others. Can we have some new villains, plz? XD

Wow, thanks guys. I've done some editing, mostly to the final stanza(s) -- actually, I replaced them entirely -_- I'm hoping (hopehopehope!) they keep with the original spirit but are ...

Thanks guys -- I've been revisitng some of my old poetry lately and have touched this one up a bit. I've still kept the punctuation to a minimum because I ...

*coughs* After all this time, I think it's safe to explain -- this was an April Fool's joke XD

Thanks for the crits guys. I've played with it a bit, especially that second stanza; I wanted to keep something there as otherwise there'd be no substance to it, so ...