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First off, welcome to YWS. I can see you're going to create a stir around here! While I am reluctant to say anything for fear of being lynched from the ...

Thank you! You have rescued me from the drudgeries of review questions, for which I will be eternally grateful... Ahem. Yes. Well. On with the review :wink: Firstly, I gotta ...

I gotta say I liked the first one better. It was more spontaneous- no offense, but the second one kind of has a studied sense to it, as though you ...

I have to agree with all of the above (particularly the part about the gun :wink:). It was so made me cry! :cry:

Hi Torpid! I'm feeling bored, so I'm really going to get stuck into this one...you might want to run and hide now, LOL. Nah, but seriously, bear with me. I'm ...

:shock: :shock: :shock: I just read this on your site (followed the link in your siggy, lol) and I gotta say I am blown away also. It is...a beautiful piece. ...

To be perfectly honest, I have mixed feelings about this poem. I loved the first two stanzas; the link between the jewels and honesty, chance, etc. was cleverly done and ...

No offense, Angel, but I have to agree with xanthan in some respects (ack, awful pun, sorry). It does appear that you have sacrificed the rhythm - and consequently the ...

Ha! I got sand too **looks smug** LMAO. Anyway, cant really critique it as a poem - because it's a riddle - but I will make a few general points: ...

I loved this. I cant really critique it just cant be critiqued, IMHO. I dont want to spoil it. The thing I liked best was the way it kind of ...

First, let me say that the sentiment behind this poem was beautiful. The whole idea seemed to strike a chord with me, because I often think about my childhood (only ...

Cheers to all those girls alone on Valentine’s Day The wine sloshes within Crystal-clear glasses – If I were you, I'd change "within" to "in". "Within" sounds so...cliche. I dont ...

I'm going to be blunt. Can I be blunt? I'm sorry in advance. They call it blunt, but really, it can be quite painful. On this day there is no ...

HAHAHA! OMG I love it. Seriously. I love the rhythm here - it doesnt matter that the whyming is kind - OMG did I just type "whyming"? LMAO no more ...

I agree - lovely. The thing about haiku's is that there isnt enough there to really critique, LOL, so I'm stuck without much to say. Oh well. I loved it ...