Young Writers Society

Hmmmm, its been awhile since i did this........ so your like my first to review. Lol ok so let me start by saying that this poem you have written is ...

This story is amazing!! And sad but thats the best part because things like that really happen. I loved the ending how she kills the baby then herself truely amazing!! ...

This poem is good you can feel the emotion behind it. :) I like the last stanza but you forgot to capitilize the "I" in "would show you how much ...

I LOVE it!! :lol Its the best and I love how her thoughts talk to her saying that you cant fix him and that its to late but she ends ...

Like the post above me said some of it don't make sence. But the poem itself is good you just need to proof read it again and try not to ...

Wow this is good, friends do end up being jealouse of each other weather its about looks, what they wear or what house they live in, but in the end ...

This is funny. I like how you wrote that you were gonna write a poem on YWS and ended it with this poem about boredom :) keep it up and ...

So I was posting on your wall and read that you wrote a poem called "love" and thought I'd check it out, and now here I am and I really ...

Awesome story!! :) You just made a small typo or er um mistake "whats up?" He said, walking toward me

This is really good best I'v seen so far! :) And thanks for the review I'll make sure to change the stuff u'd mentioned, keep on writting I'd love to ...

Oh my god! Is the baby evil or something? That was a great read very differant from the ones I've read befor :) And l loved the ending to the ...

Through the days and through the nights, she dreams of him, her valentine. Her heart beats once, her heart beats twice, her heart will break when she doesnt see him ...

Oh my god your sister did this!! Its really good at 12 years old, she should make an account and join us!! She already has the talent and everything and ...

This is actually really good. I didnt think it was gonna be about a werewolf, I like how you changed it up and mad it a differant kind of werewolf ...

Emptiness is inside, blankness is outside. My heart is in my head, my head is in my heart. Words are silent, Emotions take charge. My anger portrayed, my feelings hidden ...