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Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (4.2)
Hello Comrade! Its good to see that your showing us what happened to the soldiers on the other side of the comms, it adds the spice and tension this battle ...
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Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (4.1)
Hello Comrade! A great controlled battle and it looks like they're about to face off with Lust. you did a good job keeping track of your characters during this it ...
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Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (3.2)
Hello Comrade! Looks like the battle is really about to begin now. honestly it would've been better if you combined 3.1 and 3.2 into one but whatever. “Chahlie, prezent.” “If ...
Aug 2, 2020 -
Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (3.1)
Hello Comrade! Only one review here so why not. For the first time in Morrow’s history, the lights of the camp spun green, and the microphones laced around the walls ...
Aug 2, 2020 -
Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (2.1)
Hello Comrade! There's plenty of reviews already so i'll keep this brief, most of this will just be comments but i will try and give advice where i can. Also ...
Aug 2, 2020 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.3
Hello comrade! There are enough reviews here already so i wont say much. The dirt king clamped his hands together and the air around him flickered with light. The spell ...
Aug 2, 2020 -
Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 2
Hello Comrade! I seems things are about to get interesting. The creation of a crack team is on the table and it looks like things are good. i wonder how ...
Aug 1, 2020 -
Re: Truce?
Hello Comrade! It is rare that i see a Powerpuff girls fanfic, anyway on with the review: Blossom Utonium was incredibly aggravated today. She was trying to read her favorite ...
Jul 31, 2020 -
Re: Behind the Blue Moon - Chapter 1: My Teacher Forced Me To Join A Club - Part 2
Hello Comrade! I read the previous chapter just before this once so i'm all caught up. anyway on with the review. The only audible sounds were quite phantomatic, ethereal even. ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: The Day that Man Won (Introduction)
Hello Comrade! Yes finally a horror of war story. A topic that I really enjoy reading about, but have trouble finding and writing. Kudos to you for taking on the ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Forgotten Power, Chapter 1
Hello Comrade! An interesting take on a Harry Potter fanfic, but a good one nonetheless. Anyway on with the review. "Lightning Storm in position," replied Lightning Storm. "Captain Fusion in ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: The Kingdom of Earth
Hello Comrade! Welcome to YWS. A very interesting story to begin with, i'm a big fan of large scale fights, battles and sieges. I like the premise of good vs ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: The Night Witch - Chapter 2: Natalya (May 1941)
Hello Comrade! Another excellent chapter, I'm really engaged in this story. It's interesting to see the post war Russia and see from one of the ex-witches. Tili Tili Bom Close ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hello Comrade! Welcome to YWS! Its good to have you here. Year 2024. A company named Arnus released the first ever Vrmmorpg, Dunvir. It quickly became a sensation all over ...
Jul 27, 2020 -
Re: For Gods Saké & Massacre of Some Goats (Tales of Yasuke 3 & 4)
Hello comrade! Well shit, I'm officially lost. An amazing continuation of the Tales of Yasuke, but i have no clue what's going on. if there was i plot, well it ...
Jul 27, 2020
